It would sound pretty good if the guitar and vocals weren't so muddy. Also, the vocals have poor timing around 1:11.
Nice song! I can imagine it in a movie with someone wandering through the desert.
What program did you use?
That would probably fit quite well. I picture the mississippi delta on a stormy night myself. I a little uncertain, but I think Kim used Logic Pro.
Lyrics...stereotypical for someone your age.
The beat is the only good part.
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